Assignment 19047

I need a thesis statement in the introduction, reword paragraph 2 so the sentences and main point(backup plan) ties better together, develop and add more details and examples in paragraph 3, change all pronouns such as “you, us, we…”to third person, check all the spelling mistakes, add more details and clarify to paragraph 6, add a conclusion sentence to paragraph 7, more details and examples in paragraph 8.