Assignment 25464

You made sure to incorporate your sources, and placed them well with your own thoughts! I could not identify a thesis within your introduction? Your very last sentence of the conclusion would serve well as a thesis with a little revision!

Your essay should meet the following guidelines:
is between 900 and 1200 words in length;
includes direct quotations and paraphrased passages from four or more scholarly texts representing more than one side of the issue;
qualifies each of the authors (authors representing each side of the debate should have compatible credibility);
withholds personal opinion until the conclusion of the essay;
is written clearly, concisely, and accurately;
is written primarily in third-person;
includes a References page;
has been closely edited so that it contains few or no mechanical errors